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By Nazim

"Come on keep packing," said the lorry driver. He pays people to do his packing for him because he’s too lazy and all he cares about is him self. "Sir THE BOATS TO WEAK YOU ONLY MADE IT YESTERDAY OUT OF THE WOOD YOU FOUND AND PLUS THE BAOTS TOO SMALL". "YOU DARE TO QUESTION ME,"SAID THE LORRY DRIVER. "No sir, I’m just saying were going along way and the boat might sink." "Just get on with your work boy."

Yung sing and his family were very poor. He only has a mother and sister, but the sad thing is his father died by being beaten to death. Yung sing’s mother told him to go and see if there was any valuable things the driver didn’t want near the lake, where The people who were working for the driver were unpacking. The PEOPLE UNPACKED EVERYTHING FROM THE LORRY ONTO THE WEAK BOAT.

Suddenly the boat creaked, "what’s that noise boss… aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah we are sinking."

"Get of the boat, get of the boat jump of, chuck thing’s off," shouted the boss. The people done what they were told some of them jumped off some of them chucked things off. Something caught yung sing’s eye. Someone chucked a vase off the boat. Yung sing ran home to tell his mum.

His mum replied "go and get it we can sell it for money." Yung sing ran as fast as he ever could until he cached up with the vase. He followed it across the lake until the lake came to an end. He ran and tried to pick up the vase but it was too heavy. Suddenly his eye caught the perfect sight. It was an old, rusty rope. He tied it to the handles of the vase. He pulled, but the vase was too heavy. He saw a driver starting the engine to a mini van so he tied the rope to the back of the pipe of the van. The van moved and pulled the vase along with it. Then he quickly chopped the rope with an axe he found by a tree. He was so happy. He ran up to the vase and said "what an antique." But how could he take it home its to heavy. "Alright mate," said a voice. "Who’s that?" said young sing. "Lung hung!" screamed yung sing. "I need your help, can you help me take this vase to my mum" cried yung sing. "No problems tie it to this van."

Yung sing and lung hung took it to his mother in peace. They became so rich the vase was full of diamonds. "HEY LOOK," SAID THE VASE. "WHAT YOU CAN SPEAK" "YES AND I CAN DELIVER MORE MONEY IF YOU SAY SO." YUNG SING TOLD HIS MOTHER AND THEY WERE SO HAPPY.

THE END.

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